Hey Megan, You did a really good job of transitioning from your hook to your problem to your solution. I feel like your idea would be very beneficial to a lot of people who normally wouldn't have this opportunity. I would have liked to hear a little bit more about how it would have worked, but it is definitely an interesting idea. Great job!
Megan, great job on your elevator pitch! I found that your speaking voice, body language, and attire was both very professional and very successful at getting your point across. I think your idea is much needed and has the potential to greatly benefit a huge amount of people! I look forward to hearing more about your idea and the details involved to make this a reality.
Hey Megan, nice job with the pitch. I like how you were able to explain your problem and introduce your solution seamlessly. And after you explained the limitations of the idea in your last post, I really want to see what how you evolve the idea for the next pitch. Nice job!
Hey Megan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job of transitioning from your hook to your problem to your solution. I feel like your idea would be very beneficial to a lot of people who normally wouldn't have this opportunity. I would have liked to hear a little bit more about how it would have worked, but it is definitely an interesting idea. Great job!
Megan, great job on your elevator pitch! I found that your speaking voice, body language, and attire was both very professional and very successful at getting your point across. I think your idea is much needed and has the potential to greatly benefit a huge amount of people! I look forward to hearing more about your idea and the details involved to make this a reality.
ReplyDeleteHey Megan, nice job with the pitch. I like how you were able to explain your problem and introduce your solution seamlessly. And after you explained the limitations of the idea in your last post, I really want to see what how you evolve the idea for the next pitch. Nice job!
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