Since my first elevator pitch, I feel like I have learned so much more about my ideal consumer. I think I would cater this pitch to my audience, if I am talking to students I would keep this introduction as it is. If I were talking to investors, I would talk more about the economic possibilities of my idea and how it would be an efficient project to fund. Hearing from others has allowed me to find a new perspective on my idea and better craft both my innovation and my marketing tools.
Hey Megan,
ReplyDeleteAfter watching your first elevator pitch to this one, it is obvious that you improved your pitch. You seem to have a lot more information about your idea and are able to interest the customers in your market. It was a little on the short side and the customer might want to know a little more about your idea, but other than that it was really good. Great job!
Hey Megan! Brilliant introduction to your pitch. Remember your pitch needs to be 90 seconds, but I feel like it would be easy to fill the excess time with information about your business idea. What types of items would you sell at the popup? How would you decide where the popup goes next? How do you plan to keep the item prices low enough for these communities? Get detailed in your third pitch this week!
ReplyDeleteGreetings Megan, I enjoyed your pitch and I think that your presentation and pacing are really good. I struggled with my pacing my pitch. You have a lot of information about the idea you have and I think this would be important to investors. Bringing healthy food to more communities is an important objective and it would hopefully counter act America’s obesity crisis.
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